this was like one of my first poem poems lol. I used to love it now i love some parts and hate others... anyway the good shit is solid so it stands.
I want to touch you 
With electric digits 
Dip and pivot my tentacles on your contours 
Want your physique to tickle my fingertips 
Stroke your back and lips 
Bumps underhand transforming you into hills of muscle
And beautiful skin 
I want to touch you 
And imagine that I am 
In a swift canoe 
On a river of you 
Douse my hands in 
And send 
Waves of the warmest bronze
Rippling down your spine 
So that you over flow 
Fertilizing… 
Now lush  the bank-side vegetation grows
I want to touch you 
And leave you feeling fuzzy when im done 
And 
I want sparks to come 
From the fabulous friction generated when my palms ridges swiped past yours
Can I touch your neck and provoke a jolt in your knees?
Can I be the only one,  please?
...The only one to ever 
make  you feel like 
the world could end… 
but as long as my hands are on your skin 
you’ll  be more than ok
Tuesday, November 18, 2008
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i remember this vividly and i didnt know it was one of your first POEM poems...i loved it then and i think its dope now!
i think if i handed this poem out in a class..someone would think it was from a published book of some famous persons work.
lmao thanks cornteeeee
when did you write this?dope as hell homie,like forealsky!!
I like this one. It's vivid enough where skimming it would be a waste of time. I like shit like that..either you really read it..or you don't. You hav a talent for telling stories. Glad your doing something with that.
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